sn:/crossing the line

[eighth_horizon]

Story #3: written for deirdre_c

Crossing The Line

Gen, R, 13,218 words. <3<3

Comments

[palebluebell.livejournal.com]

This is so good it took my breath away. Your pacing is perfect, and the voices for Sam and Dean are uncanny and the *idea* of the story was enough for me to be pulled in completely. It was so well executed; so wonderfully well written.

Also - it scared me half to death. I was nibbling my nails at the bridge scene, and when it slowly dawned on me that they were caught in a trap my heart began beating out of my chest. You have a masterful ability to realise a scene, lending the work life and immediacy. I enjoyed this immensely - thank you so much.

[callmesandy.livejournal.com]

Wow, just wow. That was so incredibly awesome. I was engrossed from start to finish.

[greenapricot.livejournal.com]

I'm a bit speechless here. This is wonderful I was sucked in from the beginning, but the I got to the line and, wow. I love the subtle difference in their conversation, how it slowly gets closer to the truth. And the best part is that I can totally see something like that actually happening to Dean and him not wanting Sam or John to know what really went on. It feels very canon to me. Bravo!

[glitterdemon.livejournal.com]

i don't even know what to say about this. my head doesn't even belong to me, it's just owned by this story. omg.

[eighth-horizon.livejournal.com]

Thanks. :) Your poor head. XD