This is so good it took my breath away. Your pacing is perfect, and the voices for Sam and Dean are uncanny and the *idea* of the story was enough for me to be pulled in completely. It was so well executed; so wonderfully well written.
Also - it scared me half to death. I was nibbling my nails at the bridge scene, and when it slowly dawned on me that they were caught in a trap my heart began beating out of my chest. You have a masterful ability to realise a scene, lending the work life and immediacy. I enjoyed this immensely - thank you so much.
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Date: 2006-05-19 01:35 pm (UTC)Also - it scared me half to death. I was nibbling my nails at the bridge scene, and when it slowly dawned on me that they were caught in a trap my heart began beating out of my chest. You have a masterful ability to realise a scene, lending the work life and immediacy. I enjoyed this immensely - thank you so much.