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astolat: a spin off of what could have happened right after the ‘Nightmare’ ep in season I, where Sam figures out his powers in different and peculiar ways. Or, a possible evolution of Sam’s powers. Dean helps (for a given factor of ‘helping’). Gen case story, 11,000 words, PG-13 for language. No spoilers, and no warnings other than Dean’s filthy mouth and gratuitous mild crack. The places are real, but I took artistic license (as you do).
“It’s not gonna fit in the car,” Sam said.
“It will when I’m done with it,” Dean said.
astolat: a spin off of what could have happened right after the ‘Nightmare’ ep in season I, where Sam figures out his powers in different and peculiar ways. Or, a possible evolution of Sam’s powers. Dean helps (for a given factor of ‘helping’). Gen case story, 11,000 words, PG-13 for language. No spoilers, and no warnings other than Dean’s filthy mouth and gratuitous mild crack. The places are real, but I took artistic license (as you do). “It’s not gonna fit in the car,” Sam said.
“It will when I’m done with it,” Dean said.
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Date: 2011-02-10 01:12 am (UTC)wants more!!!!
sam's thinking about kids shut in a clock. dean's delight with his smokebomb. the shoulder hunch, the poke and mock...oh, first two seasons...i want you back so much!!!
this is like a little tease...surely you have the rest of this planned out? surely this is just the first chapter, right? more bent spoons, more directed training exercises from dean!!!
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Date: 2011-02-10 01:45 am (UTC)Definitely a keeper!
(How embarrassing...I totally put the comment not only on the wrong entry but the wrong LJ!!! *facepalm*)
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Date: 2011-02-10 01:54 am (UTC)The clock was creepy, as were all the missing hands. And five graves, jayzus.
Good stuff, good stuff. Powers!Sam is always so awesome. :)
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Date: 2011-02-10 02:15 am (UTC)It is so good to see you writing again! ;-)
This was quality stuff, and I particularly enjoyed the subconscious magic fingers bed, and also Sam removing Dean's boots.
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Date: 2011-02-10 04:39 am (UTC)This: “Because the only other explanation is that I’m your trigger...." says it all. From Sam's burst of power in Nightmare, to busting through Lucifer's control in Swan Song... to an AU world where things might have played out just a wee bit differently but the players remain the same.
Also -- I really appreciate how you build atmostphere and environment. I really gets me immersed in the moment without flooding the reader with so many details we lose the story progress.
I am actually curious about this AU now, if you ever felt a yen to revisit it and play some more on its fields.
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Date: 2011-02-11 04:12 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-02-13 02:41 pm (UTC)(Here lies Dean Winchester. Even in gen fic, he wanted a reference to incest on his tombstone.)
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Date: 2011-02-15 08:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-02-26 05:03 am (UTC)Wonderful read. Thank you!
:D
Caroline
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Date: 2012-08-05 06:09 am (UTC)Tiekas
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Date: 2013-08-14 01:35 am (UTC)I sent it to the email we used for the charity auction?