spn/:and my flame made a pinnacle to heaven, II of III

[eighth_horizon]

And My Flame Made A Pinnacle To Heaven, part II of III, PG-13, 4475 words.

Comments

[fufaraw]

>He was not going to call anybody. He had this. He did.

So very much Dean, in attitude as well as in speech pattern, even in his head.

I'm enjoying the heck out of this, and can't wait for the next installment.

[eighth-horizon.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad it's enjoyable so far -- it often sounds like a lot of rambling stuff in my head. XD

[tabaqui]

Whooooooooooooo, dude. Yis. Good stuff. I love the ways Dean distracts himself on a stakeout, i wanna cuddle him over his fear and insecurity about his dad, about doing the hunt on his own...gah!

Just excellent stuff.

Teeny thing - sorry i'm quoting so much but sometimes it's hard to find something without a little context...
there was no one melted into either of the crumbling foundations or into any side of the old church with its overgrown grass and berry bushes and the crapapple trees that were swarming it.

I think you'd rather 'crabapple' tree, there. Heh.

[eighth-horizon.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Dean will argue about redheads all day long if you let him.

HAHA omg that's Freudian, I swear. Thanks for catching it.

[tabaqui]

Heee. No problem.

[innie_darling]

“I’d be, like, the hottest cop ever,” he said aloud. I so want Dean to be making an Arrested Development joke there. In addition to speaking the truth, of course.

If his father was into something so far that he couldn’t even talk about it, how long would it be before he didn’t leave messages at all? What the hell would be going on that he’d shut his right hand man out of it? He couldn’t doubt that his dad knew what he was doing, that he had reasons for doing it...but it was hard to imagine what they would be. He wouldn’t go questioning him aloud, that was for sure. Sam would, loudly, but Dean wouldn’t. Dude, Dean, please stop breaking my heart.

I love that I have no idea where this is going, because I trust you to take it somewhere interesting and resonant and wonderful. You're wonderful.

[eighth-horizon.livejournal.com]

To this I say: YAY. I'm so glad you like it. YES! \m/

[shoshannagold.livejournal.com]

If he’d been a cop –

“I’d be, like, the hottest cop ever,” he said aloud. So there I am, all caught up in the tension you're building, and then Dean's just so Dean and it totally cracked me up.

This is really good, and I can't wait to see what it is, and how Dean kills it.

[eighth-horizon.livejournal.com]

HE KNOWS he would be the hottest cop ever! And I just know he talks to himself a lot. He would be fun to listen to.

[mgbutterfly.livejournal.com]

First of all, not that lame assclown from the ripoff Miami version. The gap between Sara’s front teeth was a better actor than that guy.

OMG so much YES!

And? This is awesome. I am so into this it's not even funny. Dude. More please!

[eighth-horizon.livejournal.com]

Done! ----> points to the main page

XD