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For the [livejournal.com profile] spn_halloween challenge: trick or treating with Salvation-verse wee!Winchesters. PG for language, 3987 words.



Here There Be Monsters
(c)2006 b stearns
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For a prompt for the [livejournal.com profile] spn_halloween challenge: Futurefic in which either or both of the boys take their kids trick-or-treating. Bonus points if Dean takes Sam's kids trick-or-treating and brings them back full of candy and stories about that monster Uncle Dean shot, Daddy, you should have seen it, it was awesome! This also falls into the Salvation AU. Humor, horror, cursing, wee!Winchesters, angst, kid-silliness.

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Halloween, 2023


Dean didn’t always check to see who it was when he answered the phone. “Winchester,” he said, balancing fourteen case files in one arm and readjusting a duffel full of a fake teaching skeleton over the other shoulder as he left his building. “Speak.”

“Your phone skills?” Sam said. “They never fail to impress me, Dean.”

“Shit, what do you want, a full introduction?” Dean said, shoving an outer door open with one foot. “Everything okay?”

“I don’t just call you for disasters,” Sam said, looking at his watch. “Or favors, although I’m calling for one now.”

“It’s Halloween,” Dean said. “You know that, right?” His tone suggested that whatever it was, it had better not be something that would screw up a night of trick or treating.

“I noticed,” Sam said drily.

“Dani’s letting me have this one,” Dean said, unable to keep the glee out of his voice as he dropped the duffel next to his truck and fished around for his keys with his free hand. “I’m on my way to get Chuck. She wants to be a zombie, and I promised she could be the grossest zombie ever.”

Sam wasn’t sure who was getting the shorter end of that stick. If Dean’s ex was breaking the custody agreement to let their daughter switch homes for a holiday on a school night, then it was because she knew how much it meant. “You seriously need to stop calling her Chuck.”

“What, because it pisses her off?” Dean said. “It’s good for her. Builds character.”

Sam wanted to ask him who the adult was, but it had never gotten him anywhere before. Charlie was only six but she held her own very well - without resorting to screaming - when her father purposely pushed her buttons.

“Since you’ve got her,” Sam said, “Can you and your zombie stalk my neighborhood tonight? I’m stuck here until at least nine and I knew that if I couldn’t do it, that you’d want - “

“Take all the girls,” Dean said. “Are you asking me to take all the girls? Trick or treating?”

His tone of voice said you’re letting me do this? and it made Sam want to kick himself. He hated Halloween. He appreciated it a lot more since having kids, but he’d been wary of letting the kids overdo it. Jack o’ lanterns, check. Reasonable costumes, check. A short after-dinner run of the neighborhood with him and Sarah close by, and Dean whenever possible, check. But running wild, like he and Dean had, harassing people if they weren’t nailed down on a hunt? No.

He knew that by asking, he was giving Dean permission to step outside the orderly parade Sam had tried to make of the whole thing. Dean had a way of letting the kids think they were running wild without realizing he was in control. Sam had never realized how hard Dean had held on to him until he was about fifteen and Dean just couldn’t hide anymore.

It wasn’t about trust. Sam knew that in his heart. It was that he had to play dad all the time and Dean was the fun one. That was his job as an uncle, and dammit Sam knew that but...

“No,” Sam said. “I was hoping you’d do a little prosteletyzing, because we’re converting to Mormon, Captain Obvious.”

“Your middle age crisis is showing, Sammy,” Dean said. “Cranky. Do they know yet?”

“Sarah’s going to tell them,” Sam said. And they’ll be so excited, so I’m not sure I can stand to listen to it. His own jealousy irked him. “She can probably help you with Charlie’s makeup. You don’t know everything about how much you can safely put on a little girl.”

Dean was silent while he unlocked his truck and tossed everything in.

“Dean?”

“Yeah, I’m here,” Dean said. “Listen, Sam...thanks. I know you hate Halloween.”

Sam stepped hard on his urge to say but I love you and the girls and I want you guys to have fun because Dean would just get aggravated with him. So he said, “Just remember that having a lawyer in the family doesn’t mean a free pass.”

“Even Leigh can outrun the cops now,” Dean said.

“Just come straight to our house once you grab Yeah-Yeah,” Sam said. “And don’t make her mad.”

-|-

Sarah put the phone down and looked at Allie, who was resting her chin morosely on the kitchen counter.

“He has to work, doesn’t he,” Allie said. “But you can still take us, right?”

“I’m sorry, sweetie,” Sarah said. “I would, but you’re all too old now anyway. We’re going to eat carrot sticks and watch Lifetime.”

Allie raised her head. “That’s just not even funny.”

“You can answer the door for other kids,” Sarah said.

Allie stared at her, knowing something was coming.

“Go get ready,” Sarah said. “Dean’s taking you.”

To her credit, Allie kept her poker face. But she slid off the barstool and walked away, headed for the stairs.

Sarah waited, hands braced on the counter, eyes on the ceiling.

When the screaming started, she shook her head.

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Charlie demonstrated her newest quirk by simply opening the front door without knocking. Christo paced her immediately with a wagging tail, checking her from head to toe. She left the door wide open and walked through the livingroom, past the stairs, and right into the kitchen before Sarah turned from setting out plates and noticed her.

“Trying to scare me?” Sarah said.

Charlie showed Sarah her teeth, several of which were blacked out. The effect was improved by the fact that she was also missing a few naturally. Her gorgeous strawberry-blond curls had been slimed with green-gray God knew what and were spiked out in odd angles from her head. She was wearing an old set of play clothes that had been torn in places and smeared with dirt, fake blood, and more slime. But when she put her arms out for a hug, it was impossible to resist.

“Where’s your dad?”

“I drove myself here,” Charlie said, and her tone was a little too deadpan for a six year old. “Are you going to finish my makeup?”

“Right after dinner,” Sarah said.

Dean came in the open door, tried to fend off the dog, and said, “Why the hell wasn’t the door locked? What do I have to do to get you guys to remember to lock the damn door?”

Charlie rolled her eyes.

Sarah rolled her eyes as well and kissed Dean hello. Then she made him make a salad.

Dinner was, of course, simple and brief by design and full of legs kicking under the table with excitement. The girls ate only what they had to in order to pass inspection. Then Allie cleared the dishes while the other three ran for the stairs.

“Leigh,” Sarah said, “Come all the way back downstairs before you put your costume on.” When Dean raised an eyebrow at her in confusion, she added, “You’ll see. It was their idea.”

When she disappeared upstairs to help with various stages of makeup, Dean did the dishes. He could hear a lot of giggling above him, and again felt that warm hum of contentment he so often got when surrounded with his family. He’d never admit it, of course. He was fairly sure Sam had arranged it on purpose - not to be absent but to let things be different now that none of the girls were little-little anymore.

Eleven year old Allie came down first, sporting some sort of bulky, furry, tawny colored bodysuit. Round nose, whiskers, rounded ears, tail. He didn’t ask her what she was supposed to be; he knew he was supposed to guess. She put paw-gloved hands out for him to take, and they danced a little around the kitchen without saying anything. Smiling was often enough between Sam’s eldest daughter and his brother. A few minutes later, eight year old Mary came down in a black cape and the green face and pointed hat of a traditional witch costume. She got to the kitchen doorway and flung her arms wide, executing a little hop to say ta-da!

“Stunning,” Dean said. “No wand?”

“Mom’s got it,” Mary said.

“She hits people with it,” Allie said matter-of-factly.

“People get in my way,” Mary said.

Charlie slid into the kitchen in her socks, showing them a face colored in grays and browns, eyes ringed in black and cheekbones shaded to hollows. “Am I fugly?”

“Beyond fugly,” Dean said. “I can hardly stand to look at you.”

Thank you.”

They all watched Leigh step off the bottom stair and stand in jeans, sweatshirt and jacket with her arms stretched straight above her head. Sarah came down behind and lowered a large rectangular box over her, helping her put her arms through holes cut in the sides. Leigh walked quickly into the kitchen and sat down, pulling her arms and head in so that there was nothing to look at but a box that had been carefully painted to look like it was wooden. Drawers had been drawn and painted on the front, and little brass pulls had been pushed into place. There was an extra ridge of cardboard glued on the top behind where Leigh’s head was supposed to pop out, cut in a wavy, ornate design.

Dean squinted. It looked like Sarah’s handiwork. Beyond that, he was lost.

Sarah grabbed Mary and Allie and switched their positions in relation to the Leigh-box.

“C’mon,” Allie said. “What am I?” She showed him the fluffed end of her tail.

Ah. “A lion,” he said, and that quick he got it, with a laugh. “Oh, you gotta be kidding. A lion, a witch, and a wardrobe. Who’s idea was this?”

“I did it,” Leigh said, muffled by the box.

“You’d think we were related or something,” Dean said. “Bunch of smartasses.”

Armed with glow sticks, and bags they’d decorated themselves, the girls crowded out the door, then spent time jostling on the patio while Dean and Sarah stared at each other. Sarah was trying not to smile, but like always, her eyes crinkled a little at the corners and gave her away.

“You sure you don’t want to come along?” Dean said.

Sarah did smile, then. “This is all you,” she said.

“Keep the doors locked,” Dean said.

“Christo will guard me just fine,” Sarah said. “Quit worrying. You kids stay together.”

“Allie will guard me just fine,” Dean said. “But when that one nice old guy up the street wants to touch me and show me his puppy, that’s okay, right?”

All he got for that was a caress along his jaw with the backs of Sarah’s fingers.

She watched them get out to the driveway and pause. After a moment, Dean got down on one knee and the four girls grouped around him in a half-circle, still and silent. Their attention was a nearly tangible thing; there was no fidgeting. She watched Dean’s hands move as he described something to them, or gave them an itinerary, or decried Milky Way over Snickers, it didn’t matter what it was. The five people in her driveway were hers and ridiculously enthralled with each other, and that was good enough.

-|-

They walked in a loose group, spread out along the street.

“Let’s go to every neighborhood in the world,” Leigh said.

“I’m not Santa,” Dean said, tapping his fingers along the side of the wardrobe-costume. “Can’t fit the whole world into one night.”

“Last year the first house gave out the shit candy,” Charlie said.

“Charlotte,” Dean warned.

“I’m just saying, let’s not go there,” Charlie said. “Uncle Sam took us this way last year, it’s the yellow house on the corner, and it was Sweet Tarts.” She said it in such a way as to indicate that Sweet Tarts were toxic.

“It’s free!” Mary said.

“It’s shit,” Charlie said.

“Chuck,” Dean said, “Not one more.”

“Don’t call me that,” Charlie said, all trace of humor gone from her voice.

“Then stop saying 'shit',” Dean said.

“Stop saying 'shit', Chuck,” Allie said.

Don’t,” Charlie said, the beginnings of genuine anger in her tone.

“Cut it out, you two,” Dean said. “You guys start with the yellow house on the corner, and if they don’t give out the good stuff, then we’ll show them what happens to people who don’t give out the good stuff.”

All four girls took off running.

“Don’t leave the wardrobe behind!” Dean yelled. Leigh was not exactly having an easy time keeping her balance, and he foresaw a turtle-like mishap in their future.

Luckily, the Yellow House People were giving out Neccos. Their downfall would have to come at a later time.

Fourteen houses later, it was fully dark and Leigh fell into someone’s landscaping and flailed around until Dean righted her and reattached her more ornate decorations.

Five houses after that they reached a dead end one street over after cutting between houses. The girls waved their glow sticks in the darkness between houses and streetlights, watching a small group of older kids go by on the street they’d left.

Ahead of them, something human-sized moved out of the bushes by a brush fence marking the dead end, and hunched behind a hedge.

Dean snapped his fingers, and all four girls froze to look at him. “Back the other way,” he said. Whatever it was, it hadn’t been human and he knew it, and there was zero chance of a confrontation on his part with four girls in tow. He would be leaving someone else and their kids - or maybe just their kids, since a lot of parents let them out alone - to find out what it was.

Dammit.

“Can’t I go anywhere and not run into stuff?” Dean asked no one in particular.

“No,” Charlie said. “What is it?”

“Nothing,” Dean said. “Allie, do you have a friend in one of these houses?”

“Yeah, but you’re so not dropping us off,” Allie said. “You saw something cool, didn’t you. Is it someone on America’s Most Wanted?”

They cut back through and reached the street they’d just been on. An adult dressed as a circus clown went by with two little vampires in tow, and Dean narrowed his eyes at them in disapproval. He couldn’t just take the girls home and come back. It’d be gone by then and it wasn’t fair to ruin a good Halloween for them anyway.

“Cool is such a relative term,” Dean said. “How about if you guys park it on one of these doorsteps here, for a minute, catch your breath - “

“You’re going to shoot somebody,” Charlie said in a monotone.

“Not necess - “

“What if it’s just a guy in a costume?” Mary said, wringing small green-painted witch hands. “And you go to jail? We’ll never see you.”

“Real monsters come out on Halloween because then no one sees them,” Leigh chimed in. “It’s their only chance to eat little kids without being caught.”

“You guys don’t really believe in monsters,” Dean said cautiously. Where were they getting these ideas? “I think it’s just a rabid dog, or something, and I need to check it out. So -“

While they were standing on the sidewalk holding an active dialect on Dean-as-monster-killer, Dean’s problem became moot when, half a block down, something came out of the bushes and grabbed the clown.

Clown and vampires began screaming in tandem, and for the barest instant Dean debated just allowing one less clown in the world. But. Kids.

He grabbed Allie by the scruff of her lion-suit and said, “Nearest house, now,” then he was running with his gun out and not looking back, knowing Allie would do exactly as she was told. Something gray and squatly twisted but humanoid was dropping the clown to the sidewalk and going for smaller, easier prey, grabbing the littler vampire by the neck while the slightly larger sibling-vampire struck at it in panic. Before the adult could get up, Dean was shouting for the older kid to let go and get down...then didn’t have to. Whatever it was slapped the kid away and tumbled him into the street as it started to drag the other away.

Dean stopped roughly twenty yards away, gun at arm’s length and shoulder height, hands steady, and centered down the barrel right on the thing’s head. Three shots, kill shot and two more to be sure, all three blowing creature-crap all over the kid the thing still held. He heard Mary scream over the top of everything else, and he knew it was because of the gun and not the situation. Allie had them on the nearest doorstep and would have forced the others, even Charlie, to turn their faces away, would know instinctively to protect the younger girls.

Whatever it was, it dropped the kid onto the sidewalk and fell back into the bushes, long-toed feet twitching against the pavement. The adult was back on his or her feet and was scooping both vampires up, backing away.

Gun still trained in the thing’s direction, Dean approached and said, “Everybody okay?”

“I think so,” the clown said, sounding anything but okay. His bright red clown wig was on the sidewalk looking like it might need to be shot a couple of times for good measure.

Dean used a foot to stomp the bushes down a little and looked at gray, folded, hairless skin and clawed fingers and toes that were far too long to be human. Its shattered face wept black ichor into the foliage and beauty bark beneath. The shape and color and toes alone made Dean think it might be a buggane. They got stirred up by too much activity, and Halloween was the only night where damn near everyone was walking the streets at once. He’d have to tell Sam they had distant boggart-cousins in the neighborhood.

“What the hell is it?” the shaken parent said, but Dean ignored him. Other people were converging nearby in rapidly growing numbers, wary of the gun, and he knew someone would have already dialed 911. He was in no mood for the attention, so he trotted back and rounded up his zombie, lion, witch and wardrobe, and hustled them off. Just a rabid dog biting people, nothing to worry about. What the people on the street did with or thought of the thing in the bushes was not his problem. Moving? His problem. Not moving, someone else’s.

-|-

Once the girls were out of costume, they settled on the livingroom floor and divvied up candy, trading and switching out as they felt necessary. Dean and Sarah sat cross-legged on the floor with them, checking for torn or missing wrappers. The girls drank hot cider with cinnamon sticks and kept an eye on It’s The Great Pumpkin, Charlie Brown playing in the background. Only Mary had needed a little time to calm down. After some cuddling and another explanation about how sometimes dogs got sick and bit people (but their dog never would), her attention was easily diverted elsewhere.

Christo sat close to Dean’s right, watching his hands carefully for a suggestion that any of the treats might be for him.

Once the candy was re-bagged according to its rightful owner and the girls had each chosen two pieces for consumption, they gathered around the TV. Dean looped an arm around Christo, who laid his ears back in affectionate submission and pressed his nose beneath Dean’s chin. Dean and Sarah stared at each other with import and an understanding that he would be giving her the real story as soon as the girls were in bed. Leigh’s excited proclamation of Uncle Dean shot an attack dog! at the door was not accepted at face value based on the look Dean had given Sarah or the look on Allie’s face. Allie had been thoughtful and silent in the face of the other girl’s excitement and distress, and Dean knew she’d seen too much.

He hated that.

Right along with it he hated the inevitable thought that Sam would have taken them a different route.

-|-

When the three younger girls bunked down together in Mary’s room, still unsettled but too sleepy to argue, Allie sat at the kitchen counter with Dean and Sarah.

“Say what’s on your mind, kid,” Sarah said.

Allie didn’t even so much as kick her feet in midair at the counter like she usually did. She twirled a bit of her dark shoulder-length hair with one finger, cornflower hued eyes on the middle distance. “Monsters are real,” she said with finality.

The adults had no idea what to say. To deny it was a pointless, insulting lie. To confirm meant needing to qualify the statement in too many ways.

Allie raised her eyes to Dean’s. “There are monsters in the world.”

He reached over and covered her small hand with his own. “I’m sorry,” he said seriously.

“Not your fault,” she said. “You killed it, though. They die. Did you always know?”

“Since I was younger than Charlie,” Dean said.

Allie placed her other hand on top of his. “I’m sorry,” she said.

Sarah watched Dean set his jaw in that way that meant he was struggling to keep something down. His eyes brightened regardless and she said, “Not all monsters are real. You need to know that.”

Allie nodded and looked at her mother. “Okay. Can I ask which ones are?”

“We can have that conversation some other time, when your dad is here,” Sarah said. “All of us. But not your sisters, or Charlie. You can’t talk about any of this with them - only us, for now.”

Allie nodded again. “Have you ever killed a monster?”

“Yes,” Sarah said. “With your dad and uncle.”

Allie looked at Dean again. “Is that where you and dad go sometimes? To find monsters. You’re not going fishing.”

Dean nodded. “Not as much as we used to, but when we hear about one, we go find it.”

“Ghosts too?” Allie said.

“What you need to understand,” Dean said, holding her gaze carefully, “Is that anything can be banished or killed. You have nothing to be afraid of. Ever.”

She held her arms out to him, and he lifted her off her barstool and into his lap. She wrapped slender little arms around him and said, “I won’t be afraid. You and Mom and Dad will keep them away. Will I keep them away someday, too?”

Dean hugged her in tight and pressed his face to the top of her head, trying hard not to glance at Sarah. “That’s something we can’t talk about yet. We just want you to know you’re safe.”

That was a lie that hurt most of all, but it was not the time or place to tell an eleven year old that the world was dangerous.

“If you and dad are getting them, there won’t be any left,” Allie said, muffled against his chest. “So there must not be very many. And, you taught me how to shoot. And you guys know all about them, so if I ever see one, you’ll believe me. It’s okay. I’m not afraid.”

Dean screwed his eyes shut tightly, mouth pressed into a line Sarah recognized. She got up and ran a hand down the back of his head before hugging him and Allie from behind.

None of them moved when the front door opened and Sam hollered a greeting before coming to the kitchen doorway. “Hey,” he said.

Allie popped her head up over Dean’s shoulder. “Daddy,” she said excitedly, “Uncle Dean shot a monster and saved a whole family.”

Sam met Sarah’s eyes and got all the confirmation he needed. His shoulders slumped with a moment of mixed dread and relief. Dread that something had so obviously happened, but relief that everyone was so obviously okay.

“So what else is new?” he said.

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Date: 2006-10-20 08:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] graceandfire.livejournal.com
I love the girls. They are the awesomest little kids in the universe. And yay! Another 'Salvation' fic!

I loved these lines:

Sam had never realized how hard Dean had held on to him until he was about fifteen and Dean just couldn’t hide anymore.

and

“She hits people with it,” Allie said matter-of-factly.

“People get in my way,” Mary said.


And Sam being kind of jealous of Dean being the cool and fun uncle but giving it to him anyway is so sweet and rings so true.

Loved it.

Date: 2006-10-23 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks much! I can't seem to stop writing this 'verse.

Date: 2006-10-20 08:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] colleenish.livejournal.com
oh god, i adore him, and *they* adore him, and he adores them, and and and they all adore each other!

you know, sometimes i get melancholy, watching the show, and thinking all this just cannot end well. but then, i read one of your Salvation verse stories, and it could end well, it *could*! and they could have people to love, and people who love *them* and family and hope and laughter and.

*flails*

thank you!

Date: 2006-10-23 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
It will end well! No matter what! Better than well!

::smishes you::

Date: 2006-10-20 09:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iyalode.livejournal.com
I have serious love for this verse. I've pretty much read it all in one hit and just in time for another post. Yay me.

for the barest instant Dean debated just allowing one less clown in the world. But. Kids. BWAH! So very Dean.

Charlie's "No. What is it," comment has me curious. Sounds like she knows. And Allie's comment as soon as Sam arrives? So typical of kids.

Date: 2006-10-23 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks! <3<3

Charlie just figures she can explain anything, so if Dean tells her what he sees? She can explain it for him. XD She definitely gets that from her dad.

Date: 2006-10-20 09:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
I second what [livejournal.com profile] miscald said :-)

I adore this verse!

Date: 2006-10-23 03:42 am (UTC)

Date: 2006-10-20 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lemmypie.livejournal.com
First off, I squeel of delight that came from me this morning. Woke my youngest son up. CHRISTO!!! His name is CHRISTO!!!! I could kiss you.
The other thing is man, I love this universe. I want to live with the Winchesters in this happy place where Uncle Dean and Sam still kick ass and raise kids at the same time.
I am so stealing your zombie costume for my oldest, who has been planning on being a zombie for some time now. Thanks for the pointers.

Date: 2006-10-23 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Yay! <3<3

I have been a zombie or two in my time. Luckily, I was not a squeamish kid, so I had no trouble with smearing gross things on myself.

As an added bit of fun? Those glow sticks - the liquid inside is non-toxic. We used to break them open and smear that on ourselves, too, or in our hair, and it made us extra-supernatural. LOL Or at least on our clothes. It lasts for awhile and looks insanely cool.

Date: 2006-10-20 01:32 pm (UTC)
tabaqui: (s&dcloserbyliterati)
From: [personal profile] tabaqui
Ah, ah ah. Yeah. Fun and funny but then, hurty. But, you know, good hurty. They had to know, eventually.
*sniffle*

Good, good stuff.
Poor, jealous Sam. Heh.

Date: 2006-10-23 03:46 am (UTC)

Date: 2006-10-20 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamthedirtgirl.livejournal.com
Oh this was wonderful and heartbreaking and funny and the loss of innocence happening and yet these kids are all just so amazing because of who they are that they can take it and even hang on to it because of who their adults are. So wonderful. You do know you've got me wanting to have a kid someday that I can name yeah, yeah at this point?

I love the way you held on to Sam's dislike of halloween. Handing it off to Dean cause it's something important to him and he's safe and the description of how he balances that sense of childhood freedom while completely protecting those in his charge was wonderful and exactly how I believe he would have been. (pauses to sigh over DEAN and his emo last night)

I love that Dean has taken to annoying his very droll child with another annoying unappreciated nickname. (it's all the little things you do that make them still believable as them and make me want to be a member of that family)

I knew it was coming, Sarah knew it was coming and i love how you wrote Allie walking away all controlled and then the girls screaming cause DEAN os taking them out for Halloween. (and poor sam and his jealousy, he just doesn't see how much his girls idolize him just as much and that if dean had more kids it would run the other way just as much, makes me think of the fireworks one and allie's thoughts best. adults. ever. if he only knew)

Costumes=brilliant. Charlie's reaction to her father's reaction was perfect. I could totally see this way too adult six year old and exactly how she said thank you in that way children have. I love how the adults all get these kids and how to deal with them and yeah, especially dean (remembering the gun issue and mary and how beautifully he handles all of that and how much it hit when they were forced to realize what was to come no matter how much they'd been fighting making the powers into as little as they could)

The cussing and taunting was great and woe to the yellow house people, i feared for their safety for a moment. Then you went into hunter mode and I love how those kids handled it and how dean handled it and how well he knew he could depend on allie to protect the innocence of those kids. and yet how awful it was to be stuck in that hard place of protecting his girls and getting them out of there but needing to protect the innocents and having to trust everything they'd been preparing all the girls to be trusted in a sticky situation.

I loved the very pragmatic view allie had and how well dean and sarah handled it and that heartbreak that she now knew and yet, sigh, all that trust in her dad and dean, that if they had been fighting that stuff then things were gonna be fine and she didn't have to worry about being believed, such a great kid perspective as well as wonderful the trust she has in her family. how much she idolizes them. that question about will she have to hunt, shot in the heart for dean and me too. The way he began to break there and sarah moved in and helped and that tight hug for all of them and sam walking in and that silent understanding. all the levels of who these people have grown to be just knock me flat and how you keep in mind that people grow and learn and adapt but who they are does not change and that is all there, the guys we know now. I love how you always use silent communication in this series. And it goes beyond just sam and dean and a lifetime of learning to read each other. it's the whole family and you tell so much from them just looking at each other and reading what the other is saying and dealing from that complete understanding of who they all are and that's trust and love and real communication addressed head on. Kind of a hard earned lesson handed down from John in a way in that he never communicated enough, and as much as he was trying to protect, in the end it's being able to tell what needs to be told is the best way to be armed and protected on all parts.

great work. thanks for it. as you can tell, i caught up and the other stories have been in my brain as well and i love that you wrote a happy future and yet kept them real and complex and make me think. I love this family unit you created. I adore your writing and delight in you and your humor and strenght. take care.

Date: 2006-10-23 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
omg you are so awesome. Some reviews I print out so I can smack myself when I start yelling about how much I suck, and this is one. XD

The Yellow House People had better remember to upgrade from Sweet Tarts from now on, because the Winchesters will be back next year.

Allie has turned out to be Dean's Right Hand Girl, not to be confused with Sam or Charlie, who have their own Other Right Hand Girl status (Sam is still a girl). They understand each other as eldest siblings in an unspoken way, I think.

>>it's the whole family and you tell so much from them just looking at each other and reading what the other is saying and dealing from that complete understanding of who they all are and that's trust and love and real communication addressed head on. Kind of a hard earned lesson handed down from John in a way in that he never communicated enough, and as much as he was trying to protect, in the end it's being able to tell what needs to be told is the best way to be armed and protected on all parts. >>

GUH. What an awesome way to put it. <3<3<3 Thanks so much.

Date: 2006-10-20 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com
This was great, a little sweet, a little funny, a little creepy and a little sad. Perfect for Halloween

Date: 2006-10-23 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm so glad I hit what I was aiming for.

Date: 2006-10-20 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] star-dancer54.livejournal.com
*looks around weakly* You happen to see a tattered little heart laying around anywhere? I seem to be missing mine -_-

Also, PUPPY! *coughs* The sweetness factor's through the roof, and also? When will Alie be hunting? *wary* After school, if they get ths choice, right? or not at all?

Date: 2006-10-23 03:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
::dusts heart off::
::hands it back all better::

Five second rule! XD

You know, as against it as the boys are...sooner or later, Allie's going to want to hunt. She'll demand to go out with them at some point or threaten to go on her own. She'll have already proven herself before she's out of school (in a story that's not done yet), so it's not like there'll be that much training involved. She will have reasons to want to rid the world of monsters.

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Date: 2006-10-20 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pushingyouaway.livejournal.com
“If you and dad are getting them, there won’t be any left,” Allie said, muffled against his chest. “So there must not be very many. And, you taught me how to shoot. And you guys know all about them, so if I ever see one, you’ll believe me. It’s okay. I’m not afraid.”

Dean screwed his eyes shut tightly, mouth pressed into a line Sarah recognized. She got up and ran a hand down the back of his head before hugging him and Allie from behind.

None of them moved when the front door opened and Sam hollered a greeting before coming to the kitchen doorway. “Hey,” he said.

Allie popped her head up over Dean’s shoulder. “Daddy,” she said excitedly, “Uncle Dean shot a monster and saved a whole family.”

Sam met Sarah’s eyes and got all the confirmation he needed. His shoulders slumped with a moment of mixed dread and relief. Dread that something had so obviously happened, but relief that everyone was so obviously okay.

“So what else is new?” he said.


you have no idea how badly i want this to be real.

it's...hope. hope on paper (well, uh, the intranets. whatever) that everything will turn out okay in the end and just...yes.

i'm flailing and being silly but dammit, this 'verse caused me to be so and i love it like a fat kid love cake. and like kel loves his orange soda. and how dean loves his sam. but MOST importantly...how this family just loves and came to be

...i'm realizing now this is probably the corniest comment i've ever left. in the history of comments. ever.

*facepalms and gives you truckloads of cookies*

Date: 2006-10-23 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
'like a fat kid loves cake'. ROFL That is so great, you kill me, I love that. Thank you.

Yeah, I just...want things to turn out fine for them, no matter how bad things get on the show. They deserve that.

Date: 2006-10-20 06:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] amalthia
am now thinking I need to read the rest of the stories in this series because I really liked this.

Date: 2006-10-23 04:01 am (UTC)

Date: 2006-10-20 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
Good story! Nice mix of sweetness, humor and angst. I loved Dean calling Charlie “Chuck,” and Charlie saying “fugly,” and the kids dressing up as the lion, the witch and the wardrobe costume. I felt so sorry for poor Allie, finding out that monsters are real, but Dean and Sarah were great with her, and Sam was nicely okay with what happened.

Favorite lines:

It was that he had to play dad all the time and Dean was the fun one.

Oh, Sam, I feel your pain. Sometimes it sucks being the parent.

“Stunning,” Dean said. “No wand?”

“Mom’s got it,” Mary said.

“She hits people with it,” Allie said matter-of-factly.

“People get in my way,” Mary said.


ROTFLOL!

“Allie will guard me just fine,” Dean said. “But when that one nice old guy up the street wants to touch me and show me his puppy, that’s okay, right?”

*snickers*

She watched Dean’s hands move as he described something to them, or gave them an itinerary, or decried Milky Way over Snickers, it didn’t matter what it was. The five people in her driveway were hers and ridiculously enthralled with each other, and that was good enough.

I love how you wrote this, showing us Dean with the girls but keeping his words unknown, and giving us a peek into how much Sarah values her family. Nice.

“Last year the first house gave out the shit candy,” Charlie said.

LOL! She’s so her father’s daughter, and I love it.

“What if it’s just a guy in a costume?” Mary said, wringing small green-painted witch hands. “And you go to jail? We’ll never see you.”

And Mary is so Sam’s daughter, all emo about what’s going down.

Dean’s problem became moot when, half a block down, something came out of the bushes and grabbed the clown.

Clown and vampires began screaming in tandem, and for the barest instant Dean debated just allowing one less clown in the world. But. Kids.


*giggles* I shouldn’t giggle, because the poor clown is in danger, but … funny!

“Did you always know?”

“Since I was younger than Charlie,” Dean said.

Allie placed her other hand on top of his. “I’m sorry,” she said.


Oh, what a sweetie. *pets Allie*

“What you need to understand,” Dean said, holding her gaze carefully, “Is that anything can be banished or killed. You have nothing to be afraid of. Ever.”

Best. Uncle. Ever. *pets Dean*

Date: 2006-10-23 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Aw, thanks!

I know, they couldn't hide the monsters forever. And Dean's right, everywhere they go, something's lurking. Magnets for trouble, that family.

Those Yellow House People had better keep the good stuff on hand. LOL

Date: 2006-10-20 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moosesal.livejournal.com
Wow. I love this. I haven't read anything else from the verse yet, although it has been on my list. But now I'm going to have to bump it up a bit. This is wonderful.

I love kidfic when done well, and this certainly makes the list. The costumes were brilliant. I can totally see Dean having a little girl who wants to be a zombie. And the description of her hair, makeup, and clothes was adorable. "Am I fugly?" I just about died laughing.

Nice to see Sarah as Sam's wife, too. I like her and your presentation of her feels right. Nice job.

Date: 2006-10-23 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks much!

It's my ideal Winchester future. Occasionally messy, but overall, happy.

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Date: 2006-10-20 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
I have so many wise and wonderful things to say about this fic, m'dear. But I have to tell you that the idea of Sam not being able to take the kids out on Halloween night broke my heart into tiny pieces. I know you needed to use that plot point to make the rest of the story work, but it was KILLING me. I'm not kidding. I think I would have a nervous breakdown if it were me. I mean, there are crucial memories in a child's life, and Halloweens, birthdays, and Christmas mornings (for some) tend to top the list. Sam ceding those moments to someone else, even when it's Dean, makes me all hollow inside.

Date: 2006-10-20 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
But of course you know all that just means that I LOVE IT and LOVE YOU! You're angst-fu is strong, Master.


"Cool is such a relative term."
*snerk* Oh DEAN!

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Date: 2006-10-20 09:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pheebs1.livejournal.com
“But when that one nice old guy up the street wants to touch me and show me his puppy, that’s okay, right?”
This made me laugh out loud. The whole fic was just lovely - I love the world you've created, and Sam and Dean are so *them* in it, and how I'd think they would react. Dealing with how to tell Allie about monsters, all so believable. Just lovely.

Date: 2006-10-23 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks!

Dean has an old-guy-with-puppy kink. LOL

Date: 2006-10-20 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] destina.livejournal.com
I loved pretty much everything about this. I honestly don't even know where to start. *g* Loved the kids, Dean with the kids, Sam letting him *take* the kids, the fact that Sam and Dean and Sarah are 100% family...the monster-killing...the smart-assedness of the kids...it's wonderful through and through.

Date: 2006-10-23 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks!!

These guys would be such good dads.

Date: 2006-10-21 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krisomniac.livejournal.com
hehehee. Love the families, though it makes me kinda san that Dean's divorced.

Nice, tight story. just what I needed today. *happy sigh*

Date: 2006-10-23 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks!!

I know, Dean doesn't like being divorced either. ;)

Date: 2006-10-21 07:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] jellicle.livejournal.com
My love for this grows with ever new stallment. I absolutely adored Mary and her fear of the gun shot - because of the other fic, and Cahrlie stubborness and total cocky way, so Dean. Leigh was sweet and Allie was lovely. Sam jealous of Dean was one of my favorite parts, because Dean has to be the cool adult and Sam thwe responsible, serius one.
Loved it with hearts and candies and all Winchester love.

Date: 2006-10-23 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks, thanks thanks. :)

::showers you back with hearts and candies::

Date: 2006-10-21 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] squee1123.livejournal.com
i love this 'verse

Date: 2006-10-23 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Thanks! <3<3

Date: 2006-10-21 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sionell8.livejournal.com
The love I have for this 'verse simply knows no bounds! Allie, Dean and Sarah simply break my heart there at the end when Sam walks in, but you somehow know that everything is going to be all right because--Best. Adults. Ever.

Date: 2006-10-23 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Hooray!

They are my favorite non-real adults of all time.

Date: 2006-10-22 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maygra.livejournal.com
I love you so, so much. This is the best halloween story ever.

“I’m sorry, sweetie,” Sarah said. “I would, but you’re all too old now anyway. We’re going to eat carrot sticks and watch Lifetime.”

Sarah makes me very happy.

And OMG, The Lion, the Witch, and The Wardrobe? it's priceless.

As is Sam's very real dilemma and his total nonplused acceptance at the end.

So much love for you, Barb.

Date: 2006-10-23 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
::loves you back an insane amount::

Sam watches Lifetime when no one else is home, that big girl.

Date: 2006-10-23 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlguidejones.livejournal.com
Love this 'verse, and everything in it.

Love that those Winchester boys are blessed/cursed with all girls.
Love that Allie is clearly the Next Gen Demon Hunter.
Love that the dog is Christo.
Love that Charlie is as annoying and challenging as Dean was, thus fulfilling every parent's wish that their kids will have kids as evil as they were.
Love that Dean is the Best Uncle Ever.
Love that Sarah adores Dean.

I could go on and on. This really *is* the best Halloween story evah!

Write more! Yesterday!

Date: 2006-10-23 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
omg thanks. <3<3

::writes more::

Date: 2006-10-23 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mel-b-angel.livejournal.com
You know what I love about this? The little things. You always say so much about our boys and the way they work, the way their world works, in the little things. Like the way Salvation!Dean answers the phone - so Dean, and so real in terms of who he is and what he does here.

The exchanged glances between all protagonists. The nicknames and the dogs name (hee!) and the wringing of little witchy hands. All little things that stay with me, and mean so much.

Thanks for sharing the very big little things with us Barb.

Date: 2006-11-13 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
<3<3 Aw. Thanks, Mel. You rock.

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Date: 2006-10-25 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/__rini/
Ummm, I'm late. Everyone else has said everything I could ever want to say.

Soooo, I'll just confirm that I adore this 'verse with all my heart, and every time I read a new fic in it, I have to go back and read all the rest.

Date: 2006-11-13 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
:) It's never too late. Thanks for reading and loving this 'verse so.
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Date: 2006-11-13 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com
Haha, thanks!!
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