eighth_horizon ([personal profile] eighth_horizon) wrote2006-05-10 09:06 pm

sn:/crossing the line

Story #3: written for [livejournal.com profile] deirdre_c

Crossing The Line

Gen, R, 13,218 words. <3<3

[identity profile] adelheide.livejournal.com 2006-05-11 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
"'Only because you put up with it,' Sam said.


Dean whipped a glare at him.


Sam shrugged. 'Me and dad...Dean, we aren't gonna change. Quit putting up with our shit. We're the only things you're afraid of.'"

And with that, you made me your slave. How much have I wanted Sam to say that to Dean? A whole whoppin' lot, let me tell ya!

It was very...gray and grainy. That's just the impression that kept coming across as I read. Which really doesn't tell you much and I apologize. But that was the feeling I got. Very viceral.

[identity profile] eighth-horizon.livejournal.com 2006-05-11 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
>>And with that, you made me your slave. How much have I wanted Sam to say that to Dean? A whole whoppin' lot, let me tell ya!>>

He's so overdue to say it on the show. LOL! Sometime next season, he'll just have to.

Thanks!!

[identity profile] adelheide.livejournal.com 2006-05-12 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
Sam has been making some realizations, which I'm very happy for. But Dean really needs to hear, "Stop putting up with other people's shit." Because it falls under the category of "do" in "the things I'll do or kill for you..." I don't know if I want to hug him or punch him because of that.

I read it again. It's a cold, rainy day, which is perfect weather for this story. I just...am still having trouble expressing myself (really...I'm a college graduate) but this story is really sticking with me. I can't wait for more!

Not that I want to pressure you. That would be bad. Unless it got another story out of you.