That just amazed me so much. This is story telling. I mean the real deal. I had my hand over my mouth through most of it cause if the intensity and the edgy, thriller aspects of it. I'm overwhelmed at the moment. You always write them so smart and i love that. All of it is good. I obviously got off on the dean hurt and the image of dean tossing dani over his shoulder. I loved the idea of allie just firing away and then later she's got the hunter look in her eye. she's changed now. it's in her blood and it's got the feeling that it's her destiny. I loved the interaction of charlie and sam. how much she fought but then just knew. her powers kicking in and the way she swung back and forth between being this scared nine year old and being an in the moment responsible adult, just jumping the car seat and putting pressure on dean's wound and not giving into shock until her dad was in safe hands. you wrote all of it so well. even the dog was accurate and the suspense was amped so high i just could not get over it. there is more. so much more to say her, but god woman. I'm not working on all cylinders anymore because of this. like how sam backed dean into the wall and was just in there. sam losing it on the bones. and more and more and more...this just jumped leaps and bounds into the land of top five favorite fics ever. I'm gonna go be stunned speechless for a while now.