Dude. Let me see if I can pick out just one line from each - this will be a nice challenge for myself, since I want to quote back every line. And can I just tell you that though this verse is in some ways a happy place for me, the thought of Dean divorced - he gave it a shot but she couldn't live up to it - really hurts?
(1) What matters to her is the popsicle and the head-rubbing.
(2) She’s got an apple slice in one small pudgy hand and is running from one slide to the next, laughing at the other kids.
(3) He tosses pennies for her to dive to the bottom to get when he’s not in there with her, and if the sun is out he slathers copious amounts of waterproof suntan lotion on her because she’s not quite as fair skinned as he is but still burns easily.
(4) When he’s so quiet like this, she’s learned to wait.
(5) He sweeps her up into his arms so she can’t see the fear on his face, before it can sink in that things have not skipped a generation, before she can ask what happened.
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Date: 2006-10-24 03:28 am (UTC)(1) What matters to her is the popsicle and the head-rubbing.
(2) She’s got an apple slice in one small pudgy hand and is running from one slide to the next, laughing at the other kids.
(3) He tosses pennies for her to dive to the bottom to get when he’s not in there with her, and if the sun is out he slathers copious amounts of waterproof suntan lotion on her because she’s not quite as fair skinned as he is but still burns easily.
(4) When he’s so quiet like this, she’s learned to wait.
(5) He sweeps her up into his arms so she can’t see the fear on his face, before it can sink in that things have not skipped a generation, before she can ask what happened.
You are unbelievable, Barb.