I have become pathetically obsessed with this story, constantly checking the journal to see if it's been updated. There just aren't sufficient words for the love I have for this fic. I've been waiting for Sam to slip up and answer one of Dean's unintentional comments. A lesser writer might have opted for the dramatically flavoured emotional blow up, and I just love how you handled it.
Some favourite lines: "What the hell's going on with you, Sam? Besides everything." What indeed?
"It drives me nuts when you do this," Dean said. "This evasive thing, like you know more than I do or you've got a secret or something, like I've been browbeating you all our lives and you can't trust me with what goes on in your head." This is so perfect, because all the other unintended statements were more obvious, and I didn't even realize at first that Dean had meant to think this, so it's perfect that Sam just replies. Also, I just love the statement in itself. Dean, well written Dean that is, has this innate ability to just sum things up.
Sam agreed, and if he ever loved Dean more than he did right then, he wasn't sure he would be able to remember it. This is just beautiful.
"Aren't you trying to plug enough holes in this place as it is?" Sam said I knew you had it in you Sam! God, there's nothing like little brother snark. Unless it's older brother snark.
And much love for real hot chocolate. The whole scene preceding Dean's hot chocolate proclamation breaks my heart.
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Date: 2006-02-22 07:00 am (UTC)Some favourite lines:
"What the hell's going on with you, Sam? Besides everything."
What indeed?
"It drives me nuts when you do this," Dean said. "This evasive thing, like you know more than I do or you've got a secret or something, like I've been browbeating you all our lives and you can't trust me with what goes on in your head."
This is so perfect, because all the other unintended statements were more obvious, and I didn't even realize at first that Dean had meant to think this, so it's perfect that Sam just replies. Also, I just love the statement in itself. Dean, well written Dean that is, has this innate ability to just sum things up.
Sam agreed, and if he ever loved Dean more than he did right then, he wasn't sure he would be able to remember it.
This is just beautiful.
"Aren't you trying to plug enough holes in this place as it is?" Sam said
I knew you had it in you Sam! God, there's nothing like little brother snark. Unless it's older brother snark.
And much love for real hot chocolate. The whole scene preceding Dean's hot chocolate proclamation breaks my heart.