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Charity list request for [livejournal.com profile] astolat: a spin off of what could have happened right after the ‘Nightmare’ ep in season I, where Sam figures out his powers in different and peculiar ways. Or, a possible evolution of Sam’s powers. Dean helps (for a given factor of ‘helping’). Gen case story, 11,000 words, PG-13 for language. No spoilers, and no warnings other than Dean’s filthy mouth and gratuitous mild crack. The places are real, but I took artistic license (as you do).


“It’s not gonna fit in the car,” Sam said.

“It will when I’m done with it,” Dean said.

Date: 2011-02-10 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shoofus.livejournal.com
so glad to see you writing again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wants more!!!!

sam's thinking about kids shut in a clock. dean's delight with his smokebomb. the shoulder hunch, the poke and mock...oh, first two seasons...i want you back so much!!!

this is like a little tease...surely you have the rest of this planned out? surely this is just the first chapter, right? more bent spoons, more directed training exercises from dean!!!

Date: 2011-02-10 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dolimir-k.livejournal.com
Okay, I'll admit I squee'd when I saw that you had posted a story!!! Loved it! Wonderful case fic. I liked how they figured out where the 'unpure' bodies were buried. Also, loved that Sam gave Dean magic fingers in his sleep. LOL! I loved how you captured Dean's 'spur of the moment' behavior from Season 1. He doesn't really do that anymore and it was fun to see him jump feet first and pray for the best.

Definitely a keeper!

(How embarrassing...I totally put the comment not only on the wrong entry but the wrong LJ!!! *facepalm*)

Date: 2011-02-10 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tabaqui.livejournal.com
Aaaaaaaaaaaaah ha ha. I love Dean deciding that they're going to treat Sam's psychic thing like any other weapon and train and practice and it *will not be weird*.

The clock was creepy, as were all the missing hands. And five graves, jayzus.

Good stuff, good stuff. Powers!Sam is always so awesome. :)

Date: 2011-02-10 02:15 am (UTC)
ext_21608: (i'm fucking sexy)
From: [identity profile] roguebitch.livejournal.com

It is so good to see you writing again! ;-)

This was quality stuff, and I particularly enjoyed the subconscious magic fingers bed, and also Sam removing Dean's boots.

Date: 2011-02-10 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackcat333-99.livejournal.com
So much *LOVE* Good ol' case fic with a slight AU fork stuck in it, but the boys remains Our Boys, recognizable as the slightly more innocent men they used to be but keeping that same steadfast core to their characters.

This: “Because the only other explanation is that I’m your trigger...." says it all. From Sam's burst of power in Nightmare, to busting through Lucifer's control in Swan Song... to an AU world where things might have played out just a wee bit differently but the players remain the same.

Also -- I really appreciate how you build atmostphere and environment. I really gets me immersed in the moment without flooding the reader with so many details we lose the story progress.

I am actually curious about this AU now, if you ever felt a yen to revisit it and play some more on its fields.

Date: 2011-02-11 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camille-is-here.livejournal.com
It is terrifying to think what Dean will make of Sam's new powers. Glad to see a terrific new story--and a casefic to boot!

Date: 2011-02-13 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
YUMMMM, good ol' fashioned case fic dripping with banter, with a side of spoon bending. DELICIOUS!! \o/


(Here lies Dean Winchester. Even in gen fic, he wanted a reference to incest on his tombstone.)

Date: 2011-02-15 08:07 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (Dean & Sam - trustworth!)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
I love this! It made me yearn for S1 boys. Also, Sam's freaky magical wifi makes so much sense! LOL

Date: 2011-02-26 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carocali.livejournal.com
So enjoyed this! I hope decide to continue it! The spoon incident was awesome and I love that Dean actually tries to encourage Sam to use his powers.

Wonderful read. Thank you!

:D
Caroline

Date: 2011-03-01 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
Enjoyed, thank you :-)

Date: 2011-03-13 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdreams.livejournal.com
Lovelyjubbly! *claps hands and believes there will be more....* :D

Date: 2011-04-03 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] audreytiphaine.livejournal.com
hi! i'm adding you because i worship your fic-writing prowess, i hope that's alright with you!

Date: 2012-08-05 06:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiekas.livejournal.com
I hope I see you post again soon. All good vibes sent your way.
Tiekas

Date: 2013-08-14 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-wing.livejournal.com
I hope you don't mind me replying here but I sent you an email and wondered if you had received it?
I sent it to the email we used for the charity auction?
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